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Thursday, December 6, 2012

The Blues

Janie has the blues.

She can't find a husband.

She can't find love.

She sees the pear tree bloom.

It reminds her of her dreams.

The dreams she lost.

Men keep putting her down.

They won't let her have a voice.

She wants to stand up and speak out.

Janie has the blues.

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3 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 6, 2012 at 5:31 PM

    I like how you compared her dreams to the blooming peach tree

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  2. UnknownDecember 7, 2012 at 11:12 AM

    Do you think Janie acts brave when she finally does stand up for herself?

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  3. UnknownDecember 9, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    Do you think that everytime a man just waltzes into Janie's life, she thinks shes found the end of her horizon?

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